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If you cannot write... Feb 24, 02:31

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Don’t post your fanfiction publicly for ridicule.

Buffy walked into the living room and stared pointedly at Kennedy. “Just what the hell do you think your doing?” She demanded jutting out her hip.
“What are you talking about?” Kennedy asked Buffy an innocent look on her face.

“I’m talking about you and you.” Buffy pointed to Willow. “Going behind my back and doing this.” SHe threw her hands up in the air.

“Buffy we didn’t mean to hurt anyone.” Willow started nervously twisting a stray strand of hair around her finger. Glancing at Kennedy she made a /don’t talk if you can help it/ Sort of face. Turning back to Buffy she took a deep breathe and continued. “We just wanted to see if we could maybe stop the First. So we did a spell that should have worked because after all I am a very power-”

I’m only posting an excerpt from this because if you read the whole thing your head would probably implode, plus it’s members only so you can’t go in anyway.

Where do I begin with the problems here? The misuse of your, using asterisks to denote action1 (which I find to be perfectly acceptable in informal writing) and lack of proper paragraphs. And trust me, it only gets worse from there. Take a peek at what followed the last quote:

Kennedy crossed her arms. “Oh yeah why would you your always stifling Will-bunnys creativity and-”

“Oh for the love of god please shut the hell up!” Buffy said pacing the room. “She.” Buffy said pointing to Willow. “Watched me die and deciding that the next slayer would not have stuck around to save their worthless butts, she convinced the others to helo her resurect me.” Buffy paused and took a deep breath. “I was dead for three months and in heaven. I woke up exactly where my ‘friends’ left me. In my grave.”

Apparently this person doesn’t have the sense to invest in a decent spell checker. I hear that ieSpell is a decent spell checker for IE6 (because this person has to use IE6).

I can’t go on looking at this stuff anymore, click here to go to the authors website. Give her hell for me!

1 Changed to slashes to work around Textile’s formatting.

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